Critique

I read the article that Jamie wrote about Unplanned Parenthood and i agree with most of what she said. She made great points on how the Senate Bill 521 will affect our teens by denying them education about sex, abstinence and all the diseases that sex can bring. I also like the fact that she didn't make any religious comments and she kept her beliefs for herself, it shows that she respects the religious views of other readers and backs up all her information with facts.
Overall her article is well written and so simple to read and adhere all the information she is trying to convey.

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